Bacon

i'm super sorry if this is suckish or makes you hungry :3 since i wrote this looking at bacon being cooked :D

I marveled at the bacon sizzling on the pan
that sizzling sound had made my stomach growl
the smell was so irresistible
as the strip of bacon entered my mouth i could feel the heat on the top of my jaw
the taste was so delicate and crisp
that single strip of bacon had mad me want another...

Reviews

[Jacques]

you certainley know when someone is talented at writing when they take a random but delicious topic then write it , post it for you to read it and want what the poem is about . not suckish at all just different

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ooooooooooooooooooooh! scrumdiliumcious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

MMM.. you certainly know how to make my mouth water. Now I smell bacon!

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

You made me hungry! >:3 Still you captivated the bacon well! lol

[Solaris LeRouche]

YUMMMMMMMMMM!

[Black-Draped]

soo hungary!!

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

Wow Danielle...YUMM

[Silent Knight]

Funny, I took a video of bacon cooking. Now I want bacon.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

hehehe i remember your poem like this... love it and it always makes me hungry... i want bacon!!!