Vows

Six word story

parted lips

whispered cries

wife's away

Author's Note

Haven't uploaded anything in a while since I'm working on my novella. A bit of spontaneity.

I was thinking of Hemmingway's original six word story. "For sale: Baby Shoes. Never worn." Not a statement or a simple action like so many others that I've seen, just an image which tells so much. This is my attempt to create something in that vein.

Reviews

[Friday]

Nice. Suits the Hemingway piece well.

[Hester Vane]

Wonderful. Full of emotion in only a few words and I can really see the Hemmingway influence.

[Malark]

I got your read request, and I'm certainly glad that I did. Although only three lines, you've managed to let the words not written fester inside my mind, quarreling over what the motives and the meanings behind the lines could be. Well done.

[Fictionborn]

Vows:

broken bonds

silenced words

shattered company

[stars are far]

-_- .. i didnt get it ! SOrry

[Treo LeGigeo]

Well that's my answer about effectiveness I suppose...

It's supposed to be about adultery. Hence the 'wife's away'.

[stars are far]

oh ...thanks for clearing things out