Brick by Brick

This is the first poem I ever wrote, two years ago for my 8th grade english class! haha.

I don’t know what to say,

or even how to speak anymore.

You’ve torn me down,

brick by brick.

I used to know you,

or so I thought.

But you’ve changed,

everyone has.

The nights I've spent

thinking about you.

The nights I've wasted

worrying about you.

It's over now,

if it even started.

I'm not sure,

but im happy now.

I'm living,

living only for me.

For the first time,

ever. 

Reviews

[Secret Lullaby]

I love this one! Great Write!!

[Ella]

This is an amazing piece, well written and it really builds a connections. Nicely done. :)

[Trevor]

Thank you! It means a lot :)

[Ella]

You're welcome :) you are really good. I am excited to see your work. But are you sure you came here to learn, I bet you know more than me :)

[Trevor]

aw c: thank you again!

[Ella]

Don't mention it :)

[Admiral Kirk]

Wow, great imagery! I love it! :D

[Trevor]

Thank you!