Fake Smile

5-2-15 Being sad is okay. It's a human emotion. But don't let the one emotion run your life.

My soul is bare.
It lies naked before your eyes.
Stained in the pain
Scrape by the sorrow
This evil world
Has made me hide
Behind a fake smile

© 2015 WritersEscape03

Author's Note

I wrote this during a very bad time in my life. I have over come it now. If I can do it, so can you.

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bcAloria

This poem of yours offers so much of your life and it is emotionally amazing. I am glad that you were able to overcome your trial in life.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.

MandaBear

Love the poem. I know someone like that I felt like that for. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! You're poems are great too! I just started reading them and they are so clever... read more

10 Years Ago

Thanks! I am glad you like them =)

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Added on June 19, 2015
Last Updated on June 19, 2015

Author

WritersEscape03

NC

About

I am a 14 year old girl who writes poetry and short stories. *the dates in my descriptions of my poems are the dates that I wrote them. I write them in my journal first and then publish them here whe.. more..