Being the Oliver Twist

Being the Oliver Twist

A Poem by Feelings in a race

I have seen all fair colours but not as bright as your skin.
I know all tones of the lips, yours is an exception to the ones I know.
Everyone tends to wear protective glasses,
Just because your dressing always hits the bars of fashion.
I could be the richest now if not for those glowing eyes, 
Brighter than the most expensive diamond.
I never get to focus since my eyes are always glancing at your stature
All too soon, I have ended my poem since I can't stop being the
Oliver Twist
Because my mind can't stop producing and asking for more descriptions of you

© 2025 Feelings in a race


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Feelings in a race
Just trying to be creative
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Love ur literary work.
Can't wait to see more of them.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well it is creative and well cute as well. Nicely written

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Feelings in a race

2 Years Ago

Thanks, I appreciate it

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Added on December 23, 2023
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Call me spidey, a young lad chasing his dreams. Just wishing all my efforts are not just in a dream Instagram: feelings_in_a_race23421 more..