Beauty 💔

Love is destructive. Beware of who you choose.

The loneliness in my soul

Washed away by the glow of the moon

As it shines on your pulchritude.

Making me blind and causing the fast beat of my heart

Like the beating of a side drum

Winning my heart with your beauty and behavior

Turning me into a servant your actions

I felt I won your heart

But I was hypnotized to believe so

The pain that came along was hidden because of the desire to keep such pulchritude

As the sun rose, the pain clothed me 

Giving me lessons of my uncontrolled desire

I wished I was never caught in your Beauty.

Author's Note

Here I am again with another peice of writing. Hope u love it.
Please comment so that I can know your thoughts on the poem
#TRIPLED

Reviews

[Marie Kinnett]

really emotional, felt this down to the bone

[Feelings in a race]

Thank you, i appreciate this

[Marie Kinnett]

np it was a really good poem

[Davidgeo]

I like this, offering a more complete view to include the pain and potential regret. Well done.

[Feelings in a race]

Thank you, I appreciate it. I'm still learning

[not your muse]

loved this bit: the pain clothed me.
thanks for sharing.

[Feelings in a race]

Thanks so much

[Feelings In Motion.]

Words that weep, not from the poet but by themselves. Good job