Pencil

, or Words if you want. Didn`t really find a name for it.

 As I began to write,

Pencil in the hand,

The sadness began to hide,

Ideas in the head.

 

The sound familiar enough,

Safety recognized,

The world disappearing with every word,

My patience prized.

 

The tool running down the paper,

Some writing forming itself,

The pencil in my hand trembling,

Words flowing themselves.

 

 

Author's Note

Just some crappy idea I had. It took me 5 minutes to write it, so don`t expect much. OK?

Reviews

[Blue Dream]

Hey, I reviewed your writing. I think you`re good.
It doesn`t matter how long it takes you to write it, it is important what it results.

[Kimberly Smith]

well I think taking to much time to write a poem comes out s****y...and this was great so..have your time limit be 5 min next time..it takes me 3 hahaha anyway good job!

[Kgosi]

you remind me of the author...david brook, his short story about the book... this is a great piece, keep this up. well scripted

[VolvoLife]

Well done. This poems is really good. I like your idea.