Blind

Some people cant help but be...

Can you recognize true love

between just love and blind love?

For sometimes love can just be romance

or it can be just plain one-sided.

Can you tell the difference to save you pain?

 

I know so many people

that keep saying theyre so in love

but they walk into it with a blindfold.

They are blind to what is happening

then when the pain comes, they just cry.

 

They walk into unknown darkness

only to realize it was just unrequited.

They feel agony to make a waterfall

of sorrowful, unending tears.

And I stand here shaking my head

knowing that i did what i could do.

 

So next time you walk for love,

keep your eyes open, so you wont have to cry

or feel the infinite pain.

So can you tell the difference?

So when you see it, you can just walk away?

And to hopefully kepp yourself away...

Reviews

[Liza]

Oh love, we love it, we chase it and run away from it

beautiful insight

i enjoyed it

[Ravenskald]

Nice comment on the situation
The struggle betwen Love and love and LOVE
There's alot in here and it was an enjoyable read

~Raven

[Cherryblossom]

Okay this just made me cry a little, this is so true, in simple words yet its such a strong piece. Gret job.

[lorrainelobotomy]

this is awesome :]
sadly blind love happens though.

[shinybluestars03]

Yes many of us have experience
this blind love hahaha I for one have
that is why now I tend to look at it from all sides
anything can change in an instant you never know
how the other person might feel the next day.
Thanks for sharing your insightful poem.

Best wishes