Insanity

I've always envisioned my own world. And this is how I came about it.

In this world where I am grey
I pluck a vapor from the wind
Screaming for release
Between two worlds is where I'm pinned

The trees, they call my name
While the clouds shift into shapes
Of my heart that's torn to shreds
As my innocence is raped

Walking down a dreary path
I'm shoved upon my cheek
Being forced and choked to death
I cry and start to shriek

But all seems to cease and still
As a child dressed in white
Starts to speak in native tongue
Assuring me it's going to be alright

She has eyes of purest crystal
And with each wave of her hand
Controls the world itself
Placing each and every grain of sand

She guides me to my home
And absorbs all of my pain
But it's not til later on
I realize that I'm insane

Reviews

[Wunderlich]

This is great. I love the descriptive diction

[luke312]

That was Da boss can't deny or lie that was da boss

[John A Common]

Just amazing. I feel the same way.

[Ian]

Great flow...sad, like most others, but once more you show your impeccable skill for dark, dark poetry.