United We Fall

Two lovers, one bullet. This is my interpretation of love. Teamwork. When one goes down, they both go down. It's a double suicide, basically.

As we stand in our embrace
We look back through the days
I can't escape your love
And you can't turn from my gaze

This world's not worth our time
All there seems to be is hate
We can get away from here
But we must hurry, it's not too late!

Whoever find us will be shocked
Picking brains up with their glove
But what they'll truly find
Is two people deep in love

So kiss me one last time
We'll place our hands upon the gun
Just one squeeze is all it takes
And we both will come undone

Author's Note

It's not full of big words or anything, but I really like it.

Reviews

[Kevin Vorshak]

A story of two lovers unwilling or unable to cope with today's world and taking the ultimate means of being together forever. Two lovers, one bullet. I like it.

[luke312]

You showed your love and you've made it clear that only death can drag you apart very nice expression

Good Read Whitney