I Am Saved

Represents a spiritual journey.

If morning gales become too frail
Shall the mills cease to revolve
The sweat of work turns more berserk
As a problem I can't solve

While burning fires dare to conspire
And put to death my pride
A smile I see sets my soul free
My God tells me not to hide

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ebb and Flow]

This is lovely, but spirituality is not only linked to religion. By simply writing you are spiritual. To get back to our roots and those raw emotions we feel and be able to write about them and share them knowing we could be criticized...we are spiritual. If all people wrote like this then religion would not be needed. As I am not religious but I am spiritual this is still a beautiful poem.

Krys

[bluessadmood]

Oh what lovely things you have to say,it will please anyone who reads..and certainly me,ha ha
If fires do conspire to put my pride to death,a smile I see will set my soul free,God tells me not to hide
How I am enjoying your lovely works
lovely write..