Rebekah's Epitaph

She traveled many paths,

And loved, cared, and hurt for many souls.

But the greatest love and the most narrow path,

She reserved for God.

 

TD 8.15.2007

Reviews

[Whisperer]

This is very beautiful! It is quite a miracle how you describe yourself in only these four lines. Your choice of words reveal more than the central idea alone.
"narrow path" - This says so much. ...Of not only what God and love mean to you, but what life means to you as well.
I loved this piece.

[Helen Woodward]

So noteworthy is this that it could have come straight out of scripture Rebekah, just beautiful and extremely well set out. Thought provoking and sensitive...it should be framed in gold xxx

[C.T. Bailey]

Another perfect reflection upon the fact that wide is the path, but narrow is the gate...what beautiful words chosen to embrace the creator at the time of his calling...
Todd

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Short sweet and to the point with a very clear message, this is your epitaph? Gutsy lady always.
Love,
Helen xxx

[Sam Freeland]

With words she proved
Her love of God
Now she stands
A lightning rod
To show the way
For others to pray sf

[Cheryl Ann Welch-Davis]

Wondrous words written perfectly.

[Ailee Way]

"she hurt for many souls"
this is so beautiful. i love reading your poetry.

[penloverfool]

simple yet beautiful...

soul-enriching...




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[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

just beautiful

[Darkwaters]

Wow! It is a beautiful epitaph.

[Barry S. Maltese]

First of all the icon-picture that you chose is breathtaking. I love sunsets. Then the words that you chose were even better. . . .

"But the greatest love and most narrow path,
She reserved for God"

Words to live by, my friend. The whole piece - 4 lines - speak volumes.
Great work