What Did I Say Wrong?

What did I say wrong,
Nothing whatsoever,
You made claims of wanting to know me,
Without making the effort,

Instead of really trying,
You only say that you will,
For someone like me who loves you,
That's a really bitter pill,

A pill that I won't swallow,
Because I still want to take the chance,
That you will eventually play for real,
Instead of just your merry dance,

So hold proper conversations,
By choosing what to discuss,
When asking be specific,
Instead of making a fuss,

Or, there will be -

No more trust for us...

Author's Note

Have you ever found yourself, in a situation; relating to this? And, found yourself unable to act reasonably; in the eyes of someone who somehow attracts you..?

Reviews

[Fia Naturie]

This is so open. I can feel the confusion and frustration in your words.

[Twilight]

Yes, I wanted it to be both genuine and emotive. And, honest. All of which, are great character traits to have; through good times and bad.

[DIVYA]

A misunderstanding beautifully described. Yes, clear conversations always help clear the fog of mistrust. Lack of communication is dangerous.

[Twilight]

Yes, indeed. Thanks.

[Inkspire]

Sometimes we found ourselves in akward pauses and then the silence continues.
We want to continue like nothing happened but then it's too hard not to acknowledge that akward pause.

[Twilight]

And, then some.! Tell me about it lol.