Love Hurts

(I) Love hurts,
But emptiness can be worse,
Make your feelings felt,
As nearer rolls the hearse,

(II) Don't hold on to a mystical dream,
Of the perfect one for you,
You have not met him yet,
And possibly never will,

(III) Perfect lives and perfect people,
Belong really in the minds of youth,
How many hours have you wasted,
Wondering who to choose?,

(IV) To choose to flirt with,
To try love or brief romance,
To fall deeply in love with,
Or just one merry dance...?

Author's Note

Romance can develop into love, and sometimes a deep and lasting love. A spark of initial attraction, is needed to start that journey. It may not be for you, to approach relationships this way. Or, if you just want a kind of friendship, with the prospect of some sexy fun with someone; other people should not judge you. But, the "emptiness" of love's absence; can be worst of all options.

Reviews

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[Ms claws]

Julian, your poem Love Hurts and additionally your Author's Note completes this writing for me. The poem itself seems to detract from the emotion of love while your note explains other options.
To me, this is a well rounded poem with beginning, middle, and end complete to why love can hurt.
You have very good opinions and give very good advice.

[La Belle Rouge]

I love your poem, Twilight. If one ever expects to find love, one must have an open heart and mind. Enjoyed.

[Manta Ray Lily]

Trust me, I have been in that situation. It really hurts yeah. But what's more important is how you are able to withstand the difficulties and the consequences after all the love mess. That apart, it's an excellent poem with a little hint of rhyme scheme and nicely formatted. Nice work, bro!

[Twilight]

It's true what you mentioned about the consequences, but that poem was long enough. Dealing with the aftermath or reacting to it, would probably be worthy topics for another poem. So, perhaps your angle has given me "food for thought" (so to speak)?

[Manta Ray Lily]

Happy to help always!

[Pryde Foltz]

Wonderful write. I don't we really choose how we love to be honest. Love does:)

[Twilight]

Of course. This piece is mainly about the absence of love, as suggested by "the emptiness can be worse". I was not seeking to create a new definition of what love means lol. And, the sad empty lives which can follow; when people cling to an idealistic expectation. So, it's also about the hurt which some people live with; living in constant hope for a love - which might never develop for them. Meanwhile, ordinary aspects of their lives; can and so suffer as a consequence. So, you missed the main point. I have written other poems, which cover love itself; as a beautiful experience.

[Twilight]

The "hurt" can occur during a love too, for various reasons. I mentioned youthful fantasy too, in regard to the false assumptions whjch we are sometimes encouraged to believe as children. At primary school, my classmates were all encouraged to think that perfect love and perfect world; were just waiting to greet them during adulthood..If it was true, there would be far fewer problems in the world..With my IQ I realised sooner than many, that unrealistic expectations such as I alluded to; can become like a curse. I have learned from experience since those days, that my views were just as correct then; as they are now.

[Pryde Foltz]

We do not choose who we love but we can choose to not demand perfection:)

[Twilight]

Yes, that's another side to it. Such a topic, which at first seems easy to understand; until we consider it from different sides. Indeed, there is also the different kind of love; which we have for relatives or close friends. Even loving relationships can be stormy at times, of course; but real love can still be there underneath. It's just so different for different people, at the end of the day. Note that I used the word "can", when I mentioned that the emptiness from not being in a loving relationship can be worse; thus implying I'm well aware that this is not always the case. So, in another life; I should have been a lawyer lol.? "Terms & conditions" tend to apply, in many relationships too. Although, they can be boundaries based upon feelings; rather than specific rules.?

[Pryde Foltz]

There is love and there is attachment ... sometimes they go together and sometimes they do not. There is love that is an attraction ... not just physical ... but magnetic ... there is love that comes from familiarity. There is love a parent feels for a child ... there is conditional love and unconditional. A very nuanced subject and not one easily defined or limited:)

[Twilight]

Yes, I agree with all of that.

[Dylan Macadham]

4 Rules to Love by!😎 Good write!

[Twilight]

And, to live by lol.? Hold onto our hats, Dylan.! Oh, oops; we must keep our masculine sides under wraps for some of the time? Seriously though, it's wisest and fairest to try and treat every woman differently; according both their expectations and one's own. It has to work both ways, of course; if any connection is going to last.

[Dylan Macadham]

well-said!