A Picture of Beauty

In my mind,

I never find,

a greater beauty,

than womankind,

 

With some ladies,

it's their mere words,

whilst with others,

the grace of birds,

 

Elegant and kind,

far sweeter than wine,

blonde or brunette,

I shall never forget,

 

That picture of beauty,

it is my duty,

to love and cherish,

never embellish,

 

A woman's virtue,

is a beauteous treasure,

and her desire for love,

is beyond measure.

Reviews

[Relic]

The grace of birds.
They tend to leave their markings on my windshield.

Kidding aside, I was always taught to count syllables when rhyming, but this is far too smooth to do that. Each line flows into the next and the meaning is spot on for any romantic.

Excellent poem.

[Twilight]

Thanks. Keep writing too!

[malmal412]

very nice

nicely written and worded i think.

[Twilight]

I thought so too lol.!

[J.Black]

What a elegant write, Julian! Woman should be respected and loved more in so many ways one never thought possible.

[Twilight]

So true, and take care. Keep writing too!

[closed account]

very classy! very lovely! and very graceful....just like a lady should be!!
beautiful write!!!

[Twilight]

Yup, even a "closed account" - doesn't stop people from reviewing my writing..! I accept "read requests" on this site too, whether your account is open or not!

[Jewels]

Wonderfully written :) Your words flowed flawlessly and the picture was painted in my head. Great job!

[Twilight]

Thankyou, kindly!