I Hate You

I wrote this for a contest. It was inspired by someone I met in 1998.

I hate you,

and remember the day,

when I met you,

it led me astray

 

Your motives were cruel,

yet that was your rule,

to play and exploit,

any young fool

 

On your mind was lust,

envy and rage,

of your immorality,

I could write a page

 

Despite the flowers,

and my kind words,

humility to you, seems to absurd

 

Were you raised,

on an animal farm?

 

Was I lured,

by your womanly charms?

 

I was young,

and you were old

 

And so at last,

if the truth be told

 

To succeed in love,

you have to mould,

the way you live,

yet do not go,

to far to please,

a harridan's soul!

Author's Note

There is a spelling error, where "to" should read as "too"; but my phone technology wouldn't allow me to edit. Anyway, it doesn't spoil the flow.

Reviews

[red_saphyre]

wow this is really ... umm couldnt think of a word... great isnt even good enough... really emotional... i liked it

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Great write Julian. There is a lot of raw emotion here. ----mishel

[CLUTZ]

Awesomeness!!!! I knw tht's not a word but it is the only thing I could think of tht describes this writing.