Take Me Away

This took me SO long to write(well, actually, not really. Only about an hour and a half. But it seemed like MUCH longer. haha) Hope you enjoy :)

 Fly away with me, my darling

Take me across foreign lands

and over the ocean blue

Sing to me the sweet song of our love

and whisper in my ear everyday "I love you."

 

Dance with me when the lights are dim

and hold me when the ballroom is away

Run with me to the edge of the map and back

and paint the colors into my day

 

Jump into the cloudy blue waters with me

And help me swim away from my fears

Dream of our future, my sweet

and how we will be together all of our years

 

Climb to the peek of every mountain with me

and show me the sun rising through the trees

Take me to the place where all the doors are locked

But do not be afraid, for we have the keys

 

Fly away with me, my darling

Take me across forgein lands

and over the ocean blue

Play for me the melody of our story

and I shall feel what you meant when you said the words "I love you."

Author's Note

The font and....style of this didn't really turn out the way I wanted it to...:/

Reviews

[bygones]

like everyone else---I love it! It makes me wanting to experience something that great...if that makes sense.

[Antonio Valentino]

You can really feel the true love falling off the page here.

Wonderful work Lauren!
Antonio

[RinntheHawaiian]

absoulutely....incredible.....Lauren, this was AMAZING. seriously I'm speechless... :D

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

awsome it was really romantic and i think it had a very good flow, very good write and im glad that u have more writing so i can read that, awsome write.

[topsyturvy]

i enjoyed this poem.:) it felt like a soft wind breezing through me and in a good way. the flow was wonderful and sweet. keep it up.:)

[Norma J. Jessee]

Very beautiful and smooth flowing.
Soft, passionate and sooo romantic.
Keep up the good work, you could have a great future with it.

[Cassandra D.]

I loved the poem. It was sweet and very nice.
I enjoyed it soo much that I read it three times!
Again, I enjoyed it. Awesome poem.

[cquig]

It turned out just fine to me. There is a very smooth flow to your poem. Almost like calm ocean waves lapping against the shore. I really enjoyed this peace. It spoke to me and what it said was good. I'm excited to read more of your stuff!