clausetrophobic

 

Trapping me in such a little space

Your possesed hands i fear

Silently captured without a trace

A time ago you were once dear

 

You used to be nice

You used to be fair

Until i became you're sacrifice

And your kindness dissapeared into thin air.

 

And know i'm here, confronting you

What will it take for you to see?

Staring at a love that was once so true

How long will it take for you to love me?

 

And now im in such a little space alone again

You left me cold

Your betrayal will never end

But my love for you will never grow old

 

Reviews

[Kyle]

this is a beautiful poem,
i usually dont like rhyming poems
but you approached this with such elequency and
clear understanding of your subject
that i've got to say, you may have changed my mind
great job, keep on writing like this
it will take you far!