Dying

Dying

A Poem by TwilightsRose

Tried to free myself again

But it seems that i failed once more

Shouldve known my pain wont end

You've worked your way once again into my core

 

These eyes stay open wide

My sleep declines each day

Afraid of what might lay inside

Sooner or later i fear i'll again lose my way

 

It seems i'm only dying

Instead of being free

Apart of me is crying

And im the one who cant let me be

 

My death is near

But your not far

The blades call, louder in my ear

I need your help, wherever you are.

© 2008 TwilightsRose


Author's Note

TwilightsRose
ignore grammer probs. if any

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This poem is extremely let go, in a good way. It's like you have written from the soul instead of the brain. Very lovely poem and very deep as well.

Posted 17 Years Ago


I can feel the inner core, well expressed and an emotional write here wonderful expressions.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 26, 2008
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TwilightsRose
TwilightsRose

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