Wounded

Loves lasting Destruction...

The vision I'm left with, implanted with sorrow and pain-

an ever-lasting echo, runs rampant thru my veins.

        ______________________

Worse than a nightmare-except Im awake,

Every little part of me, is what you did take.

    _______________________

Destroyed my soul, laughed, walked away,

wounded and damaged, is a typical day.

    _________________________

Alone amoungst millions,  I motion thru life,

recalling the day, that I loved being your wife.

 

 

Twistd1

 

 

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

a very deep piece ..felt the emotion in this alot... overall i thought this was a very impressive write..nice job!!!

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A very powerful emotional poem which really touched my heart deep down, i can't imagine how much pain this must cause a person unless i have been there myself,well i have ofcourse like many tasted the bitter-sweet relationship and walked the lonely slow death of divorce and felt that total isolation and desolation from those who called themselves my friends.
Your poem was beautifully written and deserves to receive serious critical acclaim because for whatever reasons there are in this cruel world for others to make their decisions we have to remember sometimes they are made in haste and will no doubt repent at leisure for the special people in our lives only come once.Thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to get over something we desire. Can feel alone and Ok with it. A sad and powerful poem. You said so much in so few words.
Coyote

[*~Kristy~*]

This is a beautiful, and inspirational poem. Good job!