The Spiral Path

Well we came a long way just to end up here .

The past no secret to us,

 the future as invisible as the slow killing gas of a C-bomb .

 

“How nice to see that you have managed to keep vegetating!”

 

I always close to jumping to the other side,

 placed my sanity on the shelf by the kitchen door.

 

Ask those who created the surroundings how to deal with my duality-there came no answer……

 

 

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

This was pretty neat. I really enjoyed reading this.
My favorite part was :
"I always close to jumping to the other side,

placed my sanity on the shelf by the kitchen door."
And I love how you used the word vegetating. It may sound odd, but I love that word :P and I don't see it used in poetry often. In fact I think this was the first time

Great write! :)

-Elissa