Haiku Haiku

Based on personal experience

I dislike Haiku,

Just when I’m almost finished,

I’m bloody out of

Author's Note

I hope that you enjoyed it :)

Reviews

[Matthew-Ryan Willams]

Lmao that was good got a good laugh out of it

[Eggman]

Haha I'm glad :)

[Strawberry Evil]

Brilliant oh my god yes :D THIS is how it's DONE! *smack fist to table* .. I'm jealous, all the times I was forced to write a Haiku, never came up with anything like this :D

[Eggman]

Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it!

[Zugzwang]

I hate syllables.
They invade my dreaming hours,
But sometimes they don't.

[Eggman]

Syllables seem bad,
But given proper treatment,
They aren't much hassle.

[Zugzwang]

Friendly syllables
Need to be embraced
For best performance

[Eggman]

Nurture these word-sounds,
As syllables, once broken,
Are of little use.

[Zugzwang]

Like a bonsai tree
When it's tended to and trained-
Beauty emerges

[Eggman]

However concealed,
The potential is within,
So never concede.

[Zugzwang]

A unit of thought
Contained in a sound cluster-
The crafting is key.

[BobM]

Carefully coerce,
Constantly coordinate,
Colorful meter

[m.s.early]

LOL LOL LOL... .................................... LOL

[Eggman]

I'm glad that you liked it!

[Firebird]

Haha! I love that! Thanks Eggman

[Eggman]

Thank you I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[BobM]

This is really clever. Thumbs up all the way.

[Eggman]

Thanks! :)

[T.Langham]

Great punch line. Made me chuckle.
T.L

[Eggman]

Thank you! :)