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iEye
Captivated
Seduction
iEye
Captivated
Destruction
iEye

Hearts channel
The memory of the soul flow
_____n
_____e
_____ r
_____g
_____y

So hearts often rise tied
Together like schizophrenic
In an amnesiac like stutter
The heart pounds a flutter
Dancing in loops
Emotions don't know time
As blood rushes through body

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Are you breathing?
Are you feeling?
Are you seeing?

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iEyeCreation|noitageNeyEi

Reality may be redrafted
In the void created
When hearts are negated,
Destroyed, ripped
Open
Allowed to rest in infinite
[k]no[w]thingness

Life
Breathe breaths
Life

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iEye
Captivated
Seduction
iEye
Captivated
Destruction
iEye

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Reviews

[h d e rushin]

I like that your working with shapes....A mirepoix of cut and diced mixed notions, which captivate
the eye and the emotions as well. But this is a love poem, although adapted, for all the right reasons:

"so hearts often rise tide
together like schizophrenic
in an amnesiac like stutter"

which is an un-great, yet poetic way of saying mistrust, in your own mine and in others, hurt and
hurt and hurt. Any failure to understand a poem is not noble. Your endings can be diffuse but your
many thoughts are growing together. So whatever you do, don't stop doing it.

well done....dana