DopE[a]mean EiiKNuJ

Let's rearrange this of NORMALITY
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Our obligation- neglecting forceful penetration
Vulnerable and weak- but not really because Premature
Ejaculation has us...[erupting in psychotic fits]
Possibly proud; probably unsure | Awkward
Overtures; Not So Much Anymore
Elation will w***e Us; F**k regret
Making love [poems] ain't about that...........

 

 

Reviews

[Racheal]

i love the way you write in this piece - the visual as well as verbal choices make it very appealing. This sounds almost like soemthing expierenced during candy flippin and makes a lot of sense to me.

[Carmen]

I love the creativity in this poem. Great job! and yeah... i wouldn't feel weird. you should see this one i posted called "Syrup"...lol.

[lostintheworld]

and the form...i love that too...this sense of normality... this forced compulsion towards "love"
eiiknuj- still deciphering.

[lostintheworld]

i love the [poems] part...duality...fantastic...
obligation- ain't that the truth
psychotic fits...um yeah
definitely...

why feel weird? they're only words...do you fear them?? ha ha