Yeah Baby

Yeah Baby

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

Urine trickles from
The inner surface of my
Lips: warm | re[Leaving]

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


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LOL.. urine huh?
This is a very distinct haiku!

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 18 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"twins basil . .. Japanese twins" Yeah ok so first of all that picture is so hot and it gets me all horny and wet. Secondly this is actually very creative and well done for a subject i wouldnt have thought to do a haiku about.

Posted 18 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

strange.......

Posted 18 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

you're sic
or straight
or something
this makes
my
gelastic
muscles
hurt
in a
wacky-waggish-witty
sort of way

Posted 18 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 7, 2008
Last Updated on April 7, 2008

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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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