Can you SAY duckbutter..?

Can you SAY duckbutter..?

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

Vomit trickles
Slowly from the middle
Most orifice
Of my face.
Untamed, unknowing,
It continues, the more
I have
To endure the
Presence of
Something I must admit
Is very
Damaging to the
Cones and
Rods floating on my
Retina delivering
Messages to my
Optic nerve which in
Turn, through
A series
Of undeniably confusing
A*s events,
Allow me to see
And comprehend.

Put some f*****g clothes on.

 

 

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


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One second it's a mystery, then suddenly {it pops]
like a woman wearing nothing
but a fishnet dress
one minute she's clothed
the next clothesless
completely naked

it's all about how you view stuff
there's a positive and a negative
for all, like magnets in science
and maybe this is good
because pleasure has been achieved
or maybe it's betrayal
because only the body is relieved
of its frustrated nature
which only leaves disgust
for the owner to feel
except that's all fable;
things we are given,
consider loaned
like names and oxygen
and a chance for happiness
drippy stuff can be funny
but it shouldn't depress
even when everything's repressed
or suppressed
like the inner consumer
always always always
retain your sense of humour



I could have this completely f*****g wrong
so it's a yes,
she doesn't want to see it because of what it might mean,
but no,
orifice is mouth and vomit is vomit
you a-hole c.boylan

i dunno which it'll be

good write though


Posted 18 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahahaha, thanks, reading this brightened my day for some odd reason. Maybe 'cause I haven't had this feeling in a long while and I'm appreciative of the loss?

Posted 18 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

lol... who was it ?


Posted 18 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

ha ha you know you wanted to see her like that
sooo dont even front

Posted 18 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yes i'm lame
and ghey
so i identify on two levels...
this is how i feel if i catch my reflection in the mirror after a shower...
and i love how you say the "middle most orafice"

it's also how i felt today when someone had her legs all open and junk with her skirt on...ick....
lol

Posted 18 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i dont think its that lame and that most of your readers can identify with this. This so reminds me of the time that i went home with someone who had an std he didnt tell me about and i was like - ick dude i am so out of here - i'e rather be alone than have some of that, but yeah i felt like throwing up all way home.

Posted 18 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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