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A Poem by eli mercuree rue

Touching tenderly

Taunting true

Ambitions

Ambiguously

Apprehending

Inner-body incisions

Opening

Dripping through-

The thoughts

Poured lucidly

Upon the park bench

The first kiss

Coming

Unexpectedly expected

Triggering

The hand to collapse on

The pistol’s trigger

Brutally firing

Psychoanalytical

Bullets

Through  

Her Achilles tendon

As she unknowingly

Delivered me from

The grasp of his hands

Around my waist

A near escape

Sealed perfectly

With her hand against

My transfixed face

Creating new memories

Eyes interlocked

The feeble embrace

Evolving into

A pleasurable retreat

The calming

Effects

Wrapped up in her body heat

 

 

 

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


Author's Note

eli mercuree rue
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Very Very interesting! Great read I may add! Your imagery and flow are AWESOME! Great Job~ Thanks Again! CM


Posted 18 Years Ago


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corrin does...
a lot...

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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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