Trash

A spoken word. My last poem for a while.

Down with the rhythm
Stupid, pointless words
Rhyming seems absurd
Revolt
Destroy
Rise up
Tired of the disrespect
Done with the indirect
The strike takes full effect
CRITICALLY
Screw you, Reason
Piss off, Authority
I'll trash the manuscript
We don't need a publisher
As a matter of fact
We don't need YOU
Useless
Minuscule
Insignificance
We're all pieces of failed attempts
Thrown into the mosh
GIVE UP
You're not needed
I'll lead the revolt of broken machines
You can clean up afterwards

Reviews

[WordNerd]

WOW Very powerful :D

[Ki]

This is truly awesome. It sounds like almost a rap... But more meaningful.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Epic! Theres no need to go on and on about interpretations.
Your intent was perfectly realized.
100(+1)

Woah! that is some MADD stuff.. like it, Love the "scre you reason and Piss off, authority" part.:) the best!

[kelly]

wow. i have a wiered feeling you want to punch something right now. awsome :)

[Katseye]

Dame I love this one! Strong and to the point.

[smalltownsympathies]

Screw you, Reason
Piss off, Authority
I'll trash the manuscript
We don't need a publisher

I LOVE THIS
I don't care that you're inactive, you are fantastic.

[Keevan]

Strong and full of anger, revolt, and other emotions. Powerful write.

[Emunah June.]

Oh geez. Wow....Cloud is everything alright??