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An X over my mouth
An X blinded my eyes 
An X made me deaf
An X condemned my mind

I can not speak
I can not see
I can not remember
I can not be

Two worlds that will never collide
And a word that will never make it
Outside of thoughts 
Into language 

And I can not see 
I can not say
What's on my mind
What haunts me down

Because of two straight lines 
And a Goddamn X
Blinding my eyes
Putting me into an endless oblivion
Of all that is inside my mind

A goddamn letter
And a world overlapping the other
Of nonsense and mirrors
Of reflections and thoughts

Author's Note

I would really appreciate any comments or reviews for my poems because even if they were mine, I don't really understand them and they just sound too abstract for me.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Compelling and profound, truly enjoyed the read...well done my friend!

[ukcnn_]

Thank you! I am glad you did. :)

[jade162]

Very interesting.. I believe that there's a very deep meaning beneath the words here.

[ukcnn_]

I believe so too, I just wish I knew what it is. And thank you for your comment. :)

[jade162]

You're very welcome. ^^