Unique

Maybe I get this way because im a artist has anyone ever felt the same?

When something's mine,
I try to make it my style,
And people steal it like a candy store robbing child,
Some are to scared cause it's kinda wild,
But the ones that do,
                                      Are the closest to me,
So it may sometimes get annoying,
And at times up can go my middle finger,
But I think of the past in it I Linger,
Of anything you've done after me,
I start to realize maybe I try to hard to feel unique,
And wearing things that are way under chic,
Just to stay away from the crowd,

But I cry like rain from a cloud,
 Because I'm learning that I live in a world of my own pity and greed.

Author's Note

So to some it may make no sense just words rhyming together. But i've been thinking about this for awhile...Ever since a child I have tried so hard to be different and stand out and now i'm bothered by the fact of how I may have acted around some when they start doing the same as me. Young and foolish I would call it...Review please i'd love to know your thoughts on this one cause im not too sure about it..Thanks for reading. Have a nice day
-Daniellee:)

Reviews

[paradise]

Love this Great Ink really interesting and enjoyable I really liked the font and colors you used. good flow too

[joshua deathdealer]

This is interesting. I like the form and flow.

[...]

This is amazing, I liked this write.
Love the rhyming.

[emma]

i definetely think it was worth posting! the rhyming was great, and i especially liked the word play in the line "So it may sometimes get annoying,
And at times up can go my middle finger," really creative. i at times got a teeny bit lost, but that might just be because i cannot relate. i'm sure other people will, but i've just never had this particular experience in my life. anyways, great work:)