The Night Shined

Wrote it for my ex boyfriend a year ago. When love is too strong, you fly, you reach the star, and it shines the night.

Last night,
So young, I ever felt.
His smile, our night shined.
So peaceful, he made me.
His touch, how irresistful.

Our night shined,
Impossible to count the stars,
But baby, you see
Those stars are how many times
Our lips met.
One kiss, our night shined.

Last night,
So happy, I ever felt.
His eyes, shyness by his stares.
So inspirful, he made me.
His kiss, how unforgetful.

By his stares,
His eyes reflected
From his love.
Then I felt shy,
I looked away.
By his love overpowered,
How overwhelm I felt
with his stares.

Last night,
So cherished, I ever felt
His hug, how hard we let go.
So completed, he made me.
His romance, our night shined.

Our night shined,
Up in the sky,
There was the moon,
Light up the world,
But baby, you see...
Those stars all over
The universe
Shined everywhere
By how much
Our love meant
For each other.

Yes, baby...
Our night shined,
And will always shine.
 

Reviews

[Rob Luciano]

This is incredible. I litterally said "WOW" outloud as I was reading this.

Excellent writing.

Impossible to count the stars,
But baby, you see
Those stars are how many times
Our lips met.
One kiss, our night shined.

[Dionysus Cain]

nice read, the love is there, funny how feelings can change from love to nothing so quick, but to experience the feeling of love even for a little while is worth it.. i can feel the love and have felt this and still do for my someone... nice piece

[Micheal Teal]

Your words shine brightly illuminating the beauty that lies within your heart. I am honoured to have read words so lovely. Oh that all the world could shine so brightly if but for a night then humanity could sleep peacefully in the arms of love profound.

Beautiful Poem!

[Maria F. Rojas]

Thank you!! :D

[Conversations Kill]

What a beautiful piece this is. very refreshing, it almost sounds like a song when you read it :)