Dark Love

 I am walking within shadows of your kiss
Where your enchanting eyes are making me stay
I am drowning in a memory that I still miss
But there is no helping hand along shattered way

Can a little blood make my wish come true
Or I'll burn down if I get out on the sun
The night is silently coming out of blue
Can you come along within and we'll run

We can run into the arms of freedom
We can gloriously embrace the rise of dawn
Lying together still and without a sound

It's a hollow hole this thing we call life
Every happiness is just a lie, so let's put away
Our thorns, my rose, as we slip into the night

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Love this!!! Aswell...!! :) Enchanting,Detailed not to much jush right you flow with the words and still get the story :) In short this is The Epic Vamp. poem hehe to die for and I love that pic!! Breath taking!! And I,m not sure but I might just think blood can make a wish come true,depends on whose blood it is... ;)

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you so much on your wonderful reviews! :))

[Carl Drake Barnard]

It really is a pleasure :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice write ...Thank you for sharing...:)

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you for reading it, and thank you for your review :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure ...:)

[Blue Ivory]

Wow this is beautiful! I love the part about blood in the second stanza. This is impressive work! It's all deep and emotional.

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you! :D