Soul Fly

I wish to stroke my soul

 

As to awaken it

 

From its dormant state

 

Releasing it

 

So that it might transcend

 

Into the sky and beyond

 

Past the moon and all the stars

 

Penetrating the borders of the galaxy

 

Leaving the universe

 

Escaping time.

(Forever eternal)

 

Reviews

[David Scott]

Yes...
You are eternal. When you choose to be...
I enjoyed your choice to pen a small part of your beautiful soul here!

[Uneek]

Ah, Thank you David! So glad you read, enjoyed, and commented on this :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Stunning piece of poetry !! Felt deeply... wonderful sweetie.. cant wait to read more.. and Welcome !!

[Uneek]

Thank you Debbie!! This is one of my favorites for sure

[Jennie Baron]

You have captured a state a lot of us find ourselves in, dormant, but this poem has an undercurrent of hope that I love. I can relate to it.

[Uneek]

Why thank you Jennie. Its nice to hear that you can relate! I have to admit I am quite the dreamer.

[Anand Sehgal]

I wish to stroke my soul

As to awaken it

From its dormant state

A few, too few people can do it.

very noble write :)
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[Uneek]

Thanks for your comment, and you're right, it is sadly true that most cannot tap into themselves.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Wow!.... What a magnificent vision!....
A Stunning write! :)

[Uneek]

Why thank you :) I appreciate the review!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's truly enticing... :)

[Uneek]

as are you!!! ;)