Give me something to drink.

I'm certain you never meant 

to inspire the longing in my heart, 

just so. 

That unbearable lust for your presence

falling short as your absence permeates

my being.

Everlasting intoxication, only a drink 

from the fountain of my memories

of your face.

Oh, how I thirst. 

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Longing...could taste it.
BTW...that's my middle name...longing...
Perhaps you'll have a drink soon....cross my fingers for you.

Scott

[LonelyWriterMike]

Man that was powerful and left me thinking about my recent flame with which I've spent five long years with only to have it end. Very nicely written and strong. And I loved the title it peaked my interest. Can't wait to get a chance to read more of your words.