Mourning

We miss you.

Your memory lingers here.

It's not hard to see how strongly she misses you.

We all do, but not as she does. 

There are no right words to comfort her.

Hopeless we stand as she cries.

Only god can lift the weight of her sorrows.

All I can do is pray. 

Reviews

[Kyla H]

Describing so much pain, this was a joy in a way to read, though it describes so much dread. Well done.

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like this, it has emotional power and a certain observation of another's feelings as if they were our own!

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Praying is all we can do when we mourn. So much desperate emotions coming though. I like your writes they are simple and to the point.