All For You

Lies and mistakes

My review is all false.

A shallow delusion

Of a girl,

Who thought she knew better.

I can't believe I for once

Ever thought that I might

Have even been close

To knowing.

I was a fool,but 

It was all for you. 

Reviews

[BabyBluee]

wow this is an amazing poem of self realization. I love the last two lines theyre so powerful

[K.C. Zbryk]

It hurts to be rejected, but if you tried that all you can do. Just because you didnt know hot this was going to end does not mean that you are the reason that it turned out the way it did. Have hope this hurt will heal eventually. It just takes time. Sometimes more that we could imagine. Brilliant write, and its amazing how much emotion you can pack into these short pieces.

[Chris]

The only person we control is ourself... and yet we often don't even do that. Being a person - a real person, means being hurt sometimes... and you have to care - sometimes... and damn - you have to cry too - sometimes... but being you is worth it... it really is.

Chris