Is it Wright?

Fiction?

I feel your energy,

Your emanating glow of radiance

As your gorgeous being enters the lobby.

How can I express something other

Than my intimidated jabber?

You smile at me with such intensity

As I forget I ever thought of anything else.

All I've waited for is one slight to 

Crack this ice and let our 

Conversation flow into an ocean of

Adoration.

Am I right?

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

Wonderful work with word play here, that is what I like about your work!

[MS. BABy]

awesome shortstack....and i love the play on words...