Craving For Your Escence

Loosing someone close to you .... makes you feel worst than being dead...

Oh wait! I can feel,
I can feel something inside,
Something still and weak,
Like something inside has died.

There is total inactivity,
No movement, no flow,
It is fully rotten,
Is as cold as snow.

Oh look! Right in the centre,
Of my decaying body,
It is bleeding black,
So deadly and untidy.

Covered with many scars,
It is screaming in pain,
Weeping hard and harder,
Crying red tears' rain.

It is my little heart,
Dying in your absence,
Stepping towards its end,
Craving for your escence!!

Author's Note

I would love to let you all read it. Hope so it will express my feelings well!! Thanks!

Reviews

[The Dark Knight]

great work by you... keep moving

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You Sir!!

[R Smith]

great work Amulya, passionate and powerful, carries a lot of darkness of the soul, written with much experience you have created a poem of art :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Aw!!!! Thaaannnkk Youuu sir!!!

[Happy hours]

nice work amulya...well done

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You so Much sir!!

[Happy hours]

you're welcome mate

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You..... :) very mch!!

[RAOrourke]

Very well done! Your pain and emotion come across really well here. Great job!

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You!! M glad that u liked it.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

some voids can never be fulfilled... some memories always come to haunt us again and again....
a very well written emotional work.....

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

true! and thank you sir!! m sorry for the delay of reply... actually i thought I replies before!! well, never so late...
thank you!!