Its A New Day!!

I Believe that every day makes us learn something new and important!!

The sun is up,
Its morning again,
But its a little different,
I can feel it in my vein.

The birds are singing,
In a more pleasant way,
Their sweet chirpings,
Says me its a good day.

The wind is slow,
Soft and cold,
It whispers that my life,
Will be as I mould.

The trees look happy,
The branches dance,
They remind me of good,
Moments at a glance.

The blue blue sky,
Is so quite and peaceful,
As if it tells me to be,
Honest, loyal and graceful.

Indeed its a new,
And a wonderful day,
Positive vibes are in,
To take me on the right way!!

Reviews

[armin]

Good morning dear.
What a beautiful morning indeed, hmm..
the fresh breeze and aroma.

Nice piece of poetry.

armin. ...

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

hehe gd mawnin...
n thanks a lot :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Morning described in a beautiful way... good one

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

thanks a lot sir!!

[Devanshu Rajput]

Wow! A amazing piece of write. I found myself lost in the labyrinth of your words. I easily can feel the feelings that you want to convey. I remember a saying by the legendary poet of Italian Literature Dante Alighieri, which is a part of his great work The Divine Comedy.

"Remember tonight is the beginning of forever".

I can see your optimistic approach towards life. It is a must to have positive perspective towards life. I think that you have been inspired by the poems of William Wordsworth, who is a synonym of Nature. I greatly admire his work.

Keep up the good work.

My best wishes,

Devanshu

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You Mate!! You're words truly filled me up with encouragement .... thanks a ton!!

[Devanshu Rajput]

Your are welcome.....

[Warren Daniel II]

I really liked the message behind the poem, I also liked the rhyme scheme and the poems progression, well done

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You!! m glad you liked it... thanks!!

[R Smith]

lovely rhyme's Amulya, in a beautiful poem of sunshine and light, the beginning of creativity and you use it well :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You Sir... your words are always so encouragig ...

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank you Sir.... your words are always so encouraging. .

[Anupam]

Impressive,Liked your message.

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You Mate!!

[The Dark Knight]

Great!!! I like it

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank you mate!!

[The Dark Knight]

no need of thanks.. :)