Seperate

Seperating the flesh

Just to see blood that she spilled..

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

This can be construed in many different ways.. it can either be seen as your words as truth, or it can be your imagination. Either way, raw.

[A Risen Heroine.]

Dude, don't you ever cut.
You promised me, remember?

[Coyote Poetry]

Many places does the poem take the reader. Blood can be spilled for many reasons. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Athina]

I'm just imagining what is it.
Hehe is it a wound Kabayan?
Or a vampire eating a flesh of a girl while blood was flowing?
Or a criminal killing a girl?
???

[Justin Flume]

Keep guessing my bro. Sry for the spell errors. i'm drunk atm

[eglantine]

ok, I've sat on this poem for a bit now and I can't get a certain kind of disturbing image out of my head. I highly doubt you meant it to appear so, but it sounds so...

I think you meant separating each side of a flesh wound to let the blood spill out more, but i can't stop thinking of something else...

[Justin Flume]

What's your thoughts then?

[Dayran]

Discernment is a powerful instrument in the right hands. Keep at it.