Suicide At Death

We all have it in us.(:

How do I breathe without you?

How do I live without you?

It’s all one thing,

Right after another,

How much more can I take?

Will I last another year?

Or will die?

Will it be suicide?

Suicide at death,

I believe so,

It’ll all be gone,

They say fly!

That’s just what I’ll do,

Give me the time,

Don’t waste it,

I have better to do,

So just hand over that knife,

And you won’t have to deal,

Deal with me anymore,

This is my death,

Suicide At Death.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Amazing job in this, the expression here is awfully morose and dark; just how I love it. The ending is quite haunting; if I do say so myself. The questions stated in this are common among many people suffering from depression.
Good job.