Life goes on even affter time stops.

Life goes on even affter time stops.

A Poem by UpComesDown

Breathing

In

Out

In

Out.

TIme Ticking

Tick

Tock

Tick

Tock

Until it all just

...

Stops

© 2009 UpComesDown


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Wow. Simple, very few words. But this piece is quote powerful. Nice work!

-Howl

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 25, 2009

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