Stress Ball

Stress Ball

A Poem by UpComesDown

Relieve your stress.

Manage your pain.

Curl me in a fist

Have no restrain.

 

Just use me

Like you always do.

Find me in my hiding

And snap me in two.

 

I really don't care

What you do to me.

You've done enough

Can't you see?

 

I'm just your stress ball.

I promise I won't cry

You'll feel better

After just one try.

 

You never cared before

About what I think and feel.

Just continue like usual

Isn't that the appeal?

© 2010 UpComesDown


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Oh my at first I thought this was going to be the personification of a stress ball, plain simple and boring but it was anything but. The idea of someone saying they are a stress ball that they are just a form of relief its sad and yet so many people can relate to it, i know I can. Such a cleverly manipulated poem. I loved it.
Relieve your stress.

Manage your pain.

Curl me in a fist

Have no restrain.



Just use me

Like you always do.

Find me in my hiding

And snap me in two.

^My fave parts.
With love,
Tallulah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh my at first I thought this was going to be the personification of a stress ball, plain simple and boring but it was anything but. The idea of someone saying they are a stress ball that they are just a form of relief its sad and yet so many people can relate to it, i know I can. Such a cleverly manipulated poem. I loved it.
Relieve your stress.

Manage your pain.

Curl me in a fist

Have no restrain.



Just use me

Like you always do.

Find me in my hiding

And snap me in two.

^My fave parts.
With love,
Tallulah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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So sad. The idea of being used by someone and comparing it to a stress ball was a good metaphor. Very creative. I love the rhyme in this piece and the flow of the words. This poem was really good! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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