fin?

fin?

A Poem by V.J.

my first breath after a coma was like fire

slow

intense

and burning

till it bruned right through me and air could no longer fill my lungs

could no longer fill my soul

 

 

 

© 2010 V.J.


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You went through a coma??

Posted 15 Years Ago
I thought you said "short and simple"
not depressing and....um short!
haha I'm kidding, it was nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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