Tired

Tired of this life

Tired of this lonliness

People walking by

Never taking a glance

At the woman with holes in her pants

They do not see

The heart in my hand

I carved it out cause of the pain I'm in

Author's Note

I kno its kinda corny but I'm posting it anyway..Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I like this piece, it shows what someone doesn't see... In society we are trained not to see who there really is. It reminded me of a song by the sick puppies i think cause it reminds me of a line in the song... The emotions were well expressed and it makes the reader feel inspired to actually go actually look at someone... A Great Write! Good Job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

i envision some one homeless and everyone walking around her like she is nothing, that is all to true in this world people go about their lives and treat those without like trash... where has humanity gone.

[Joseph - Michael]

I'm thinking it's about "rape" because of the line "At the woman with holes in her pants" and then she took her own heart out because she's burden with the unbearable pain she just went through. I'm saying that because "Taking out the heart" does means "No more pain" but, it does have many other meanings.

On the other hand (which I'm not holding my heart with) It's really good, yet it's so sad at the same time..,