Under your Spell

This crazy feeling

This...sexual healing

The fire kindling

~

This love I'm feeling

This crazy urge

Soon our bodies will merge

~

I was waiting for it

The pain, the pleasure

Your fangs cutting through the leather

I try to hold myself together

But its too late

I'm all the way under

Reviews

[Lydia]

Good job, this piece was vivid and nicely written.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on your vampire-contest win!

Sal

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Vampires? Vampires are not the only creatures with fangs. It could be a werwulf, a vlorlok...I love all the old words for the children of the night. very nicely written.

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and too the point, a very nice write.

[Wolfwind Words]

I love this one! Full of passion and excitement the feeling of letting go, submitting to the throes of extasy and sexual momentum.

I loved the first stanza. It's image of something that breaks us down and heals us at the same time was really good.

Beautiful poem E!

Your humble Wolf,
Aaron

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

One of my favorites of yours... the feelings you have were vivid and amazing... it flowed like dripping blood. It's funny how vampires can put us under a spell... I loved the use of leather and fangs and everything... Very seductive... GREAT JOB!

[Coby Cullen]

Wow that was awesome =D

And vampires rule

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a fabulous fast pace write that shows just how crazy and wonderful love can be... and just like avampire it can last for eternity!!

[MistyJRose]

a very nice seductive twist using vampires. i like it. you described the sexual experiences of the narrator very well here. Awesome! loved it

[Last Lying Look]

Great poem. I like it. Vampires eh? I love em personally.