angel boy

A guy I fell for, though I do not comprehend how I feel, I know that at least.

it was a careless meeting,

an unintentional call,

a withered fall of retrograde,

you fought your demons,

fallen down weary, with a broken wing,

returning me frozen,

by your tainted touch.

Reviews

[Ayushi Beura]

Short and effective!!! Somewhere the flow of the poem touches the soul, overall good job, amazingly written!!!

[Paul Bell]

Short poem. But a lot in it. Sometimes you need to go with the open mind approach. Is it the person you fell for, or the person you want him to be.

[elfthereal]

nice take, you make me question myself, I saw a splitting image of him in me, and wanted to be a hearth to carry through his fights, but in the end, he became like the past me, and I left, not sure, whether I did any good at all

[Paul Bell]

Can only do your best.

[Cattleya]

Wow very good

[AmorphiusX]

:O super good!