I like it when it rains.

Pretty words for pretty things.

A storm brews overhead.
It begins with a tremor.
A deep rumble,
And the sky hides her face.
The air blushes in electricity.
A sudden flash of pain,
The inevitable shock,
The resulting satisfaction.
Boom.
Crack.
Sizzlepopcrack.
She screams.
She laughs.
She sighs.
She relents.
And showers the jealous earth with her glory.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

The fragrance of your words has described the days
without end as the Heavens complain that their sleep
was interrupted with the winds of time and the thunder and
lightening was simply Hard Rock with the volume turned up.
At least we have days when skies are blue with formations of
clouds that rest upon a sky that wonders why? So do we wonder.
truly, Pat

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

:)
Thx so much

[Papaya]

A beautiful storm be it metaphorical or literal.
Nice sound effects too. :)

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Yeah... See I feel like I should maybe have the mature label on this one....
Come on, stupid. Get your head in the game!

Thank you, though. I do like this one :)

[Papaya]

Who are you calling stupid? :)
And what do you mean by "get your head in the game"?

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Talking to myself, there.
But hey, if the big old stupid shoe fits...
;)

[Papaya]

Tried it on. Doesn't fit. :)
(Clown)

[Meggu]

I see something else here...or someone. Is it? Its lovely, nevertheless.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Good eye ;) Something else, indeed.

Honestly didn't think anyone would notice beyond a passing fancy.

Actual storms are fun too, but inspiration has to come from *somewhere*.

[Meggu]

Maybe like weeding... ;).

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Nature *is* beautiful, isn't it

[Nariko]

I like the way you conveyed the storm. It was powerful and the sound effects were cool!

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Thx :)
Storms sound nicer when you write them as something else.

[T.S. Ulmus]

Frankly, I wasn't into it until the last line. And then the reread felt brilliant.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Lol thx.
That's what I shoot for most of the time:
Nonsense until the last.