How Does The Sun Rise

It is by will alone I set my mind in motion

To the east, the mourning sun rises 

Secretive and silent 

Weeping golden light through my bedroom window 

Each ray slips through my hands and spills onto the floor 

In a melancholy puddle where I bathe 

In her glorious, beautiful sadness

Reviews

[bee]

This made me want to sit on my balcony at sunrise with a cup of tea. What a beautiful piece!

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

:)
thx so much!
The sun is a great source of inspiration.

[Reinrose]

The sun is pleased

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

It makes me happy to think so.
That was my only intention.
:)

[Dave Brown]

I read this previously and enjoyed the write but was disappointed about the effect the sun had on you
for me, it surpasses even chocolate
which side of the bed do you exit, possibly that is the problem
just thinking

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

On the contrary, I think it's a beautiful and wonderful thing. I like that it comes across as so sad for some reason, but I meant it more of as an ode to it's beauty.
Not sure how it turned out the way it did, but I like it just the same.

[Cory Barrett]

Yeah, this is gorgeous writing.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Lol thx so much :)
It's important to remember that everything can be wonderful.

[Papaya]

Why is the sun mourning?
Beautifully crafted poetry but it makes me wonder at the underlying sadness.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Me too :(
But sometimes, all we can do is wonder.
Just never forget to appreciate it for what it is.
(Probably very tired. It's a tough job, with terrible hours.)

[Papaya]

Yet it never misses a day of work...

[Reinrose]

This is sweet. Curious about the tag “kitty” :)

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Of you you are.
Curiosity is in your nature.
:)