Have you tried with a stranger?

You taking slow her lovely dress,

Taking her tights, there is no guess �"

Tonight it’s time, for bit of fun,

To have it loud and here it comes.

She quietly screams,

There is no one,

To take her scream,

In to account….

You push it hard,

She squeezes her legs,

You’re making house - into a mess,


You want explore,

Each inch of body,

Constringe the throat,

So pushing harder…

While finger tips,

Is on her waist,

There is no time,

For you to waste…

She turns the back,

And slightly bends,

A great adventure,

Here intends…

The walls, the floors,

The kitchen’s table,

Each single toy

Is here available…

The cheeky morning,

Is coming through,

And in the house �"

It’s only you.

Reviews

[Vaiduka]

Thanks, Brian, appreciated! I know grammar is not my strongest skill, still working on it :-)

[Khance]

Well, that was quite thought provoking. I do hope that it was intended to be naughty themed, otherwise I'm just quite dirty minded. ;)

There are a few grammatical errors, but the flow of the poem is good, nice pace. Seemed like a slightly rushed ending, but I did enjoy how you wrote it. Keep up the good work, I'm going to have a look at your other stuff now.

Brian x